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Nothing sickness
golden putrid
and a weakness
disaster stupid
just a witness
wingless cupid
This is not a test
but offensive circumstance
thinking you're the best
then step up and take a chance
Breathing sickness
blank and staring
just the witless
not the caring
cold and heartless
never daring
This is not a test
but offensive circumstance
thinking you're the best
then step up and take that chance
golden putrid
and a weakness
disaster stupid
just a witness
wingless cupid
This is not a test
but offensive circumstance
thinking you're the best
then step up and take a chance
Breathing sickness
blank and staring
just the witless
not the caring
cold and heartless
never daring
This is not a test
but offensive circumstance
thinking you're the best
then step up and take that chance
This remained untitled for a long time, so after reviewing it to post I came up with a title "Swing Batta." I was thinking "Sa-wing Batta" but I thought that sounded too much like Alan Ruck in Ferris Bueler's Day Off.
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Very 'lyrical'. Makes me want to sing it lol. I like how it flows so nicely and the emotion that comes from it. 